There's lots that's good here and some of your analysis is excellent.
However, it is sometimes hard to know what to read first on the slides - eg the first bit of writing seems to begin with "The text also has key words" - make the journey clearer in the Prezi. This problem is worst in the DPS analysis, where I simply don't know what to read!
You named your MAGAZINE 'Marmalede', not your masthead!
In the next slide you say 'the title of my magazine is 'what's on her mind'. You mean to say that one of your COVER LINES uses this language, I think.
Quite a lot os spelling errors in the Prezi - please proofread carefully. Eg 'thruth', 'subscripion will bring in a certain amount of pee each weak'(!!), laser spelt two different ways in same sentence, 'regea'...
There's lots that's good here and some of your analysis is excellent.
ReplyDeleteHowever, it is sometimes hard to know what to read first on the slides - eg the first bit of writing seems to begin with "The text also has key words" - make the journey clearer in the Prezi. This problem is worst in the DPS analysis, where I simply don't know what to read!
You named your MAGAZINE 'Marmalede', not your masthead!
In the next slide you say 'the title of my magazine is 'what's on her mind'. You mean to say that one of your COVER LINES uses this language, I think.
Quite a lot os spelling errors in the Prezi - please proofread carefully. Eg 'thruth', 'subscripion will bring in a certain amount of pee each weak'(!!), laser spelt two different ways in same sentence, 'regea'...
What do you mean by 'urban'-looking text?